2:58 p.m.
Dear all,
Many thanks for your contributions.
I have already transferred much of the new suggestions to my master copy, but thanks to
your nice and active participation, some of these texts get changed to new versions
requiring multiple transfers. So I think it would be most effective if you continue with
your changes until 17:00, and then stop, so that I can use that version for updating my
master copy. I will then upload a new version for your attention tomorrow.
In your revisions until then please consider these point:
* Please cut and sharpen your own texts – the proposal is too long already and some
sections are still missing. (If not necessary, do not add more texts.)
* When editing your DC projects, please be very concise (around 17 lines) without
losing important stuff, and also include a short description of the problem area, the
objective(s) with the project, and how the project will work in practical terms.
Thanks,
Nasrine